Question

trying to get a position in my drama club please help edit

Answer 1

@pinkcandyrosez882

Answer 2

This is after I edited it. It's basically exactly what you had, with some minor punctuation and capitalization fixes. I also clarified some main points. Also, is "Thespians" the name of your drama club? If so, you may want to capitalize it.

Drama is my second home. Theater is my inspiration. Thespians is my community. In my three years of drama, I have developed friendships, gained confidence, and learned valuable life skills. While finding new passions, I have discovered that I not only want to continue to be part of drama, but finish my last year contributing as an officer. As an active member of thespians, I want to pursue the position of Clerk. Clerk is a position which has the main responsibilities of tracking attendance and thespians points. I am often seen as a great advocate in the stance of communication, a necessity of great importance in this job. I am great at speaking to others and I am certainly not afraid to ask questions when needed. Another skill that I acquire is ideas as well as an open mind. I have plenty of ideas on how track points and communicate with others, while also being open to any suggestions. I am so excited for this year, and I hope to participate this year as your Clerk!

Answer 3

Thespians is a drama honor society so yea i would capitolize it lol

here is what i have now

Drama is my second home. Theater is my inspiration. Thespians is my community. In my three years of drama, I have developed friendships, gained confidence, and valuable life skills. While finding new passions, I have discovered that I not only want to continue to be part of drama, but finish my last year contributing as an officer. As an active member of Thespians I want to pursue the position of Clerk. Clerk is a position which has the main responsibilities of tracking attendance and thespians points. Often, I am seen as a great advocate in the stance of communication, a necessity of great importance in this job. Strong characteristics of mine involve speaking to others, being an active listener, and inquiring information. Another skill that I possess, is ideas as well as an open mind. I have plenty of ideas on how to track points and communicate with others, while also being open to any suggestions. I am so excited for this year and hope to participate as your Clerk!

Answer 4

@epikenzie