Question

Rewrite the following paragraph with the goal of reducing unnecessary wordiness.

In my opinion, our country will be served much better than it is being served now if we had a President in office who was much more concerned with the welfare of the common people than with the welfare of big corporations. I think that the President is so concerned about getting elected back into office for his next term that he has to focus too much energy on raising money for his next campaign. To get that money, he has to rely on big contributions from big corporations that contribute a lot of money to cam

Answer 1

@happy_to_help

Answer 2

one sec im reading it

Answer 3

i see what the question is telling you to do but i dont see no way to make it shorter

Answer 4

np

Answer 5

you get medal anyways ;)