Question

Feedback from anyone who want to give it, on this poem. Also I still have not named it, so any idea?
I wrote part of this a few months ago, and I finished it today

Answer 1

One year and 47 days,
Exactly,
Going on forever,
It seems,
The longer periods seem longer,
And the short time periods shorter,
Still it could have been last night,
We’re a year older,
A little goofy-er,
A lot bigger,
You’ve moved on with life,
I seem to be stuck in a time bubble,
Stuck in something that ended,
Five months ago,
We still talk,
About life as it is now,
But my brain is still stuck in the past,
I tell myself it’s time to let go,
But it seems impossible,
I still hear you talking,]
Inside my head,
I wish I could make you come back,
But you’re just beyond reach,
Just out of sight

Answer 2

@jessmitz @ispike

Answer 3

@red_x

Answer 4

wow

Answer 5

lol what do you think?

Answer 6

i think u got talent and i love poetry ;)

Answer 7

lol aww thx =)