Proof me? Let me know if this is good. I'll medal you just for an opinion.

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mattyboyy · Answer

THIS IS THE TOPIC

In Sophocles's ancient Greek tragedy Antigone, the character of Antigone chooses to follow her own conscience and oppose the power of the state as embodied by Creon, the ruler of Thebes. In contrast, Creon states that disobedience to the law is the greatest evil.

Which character's position or actions do you tend to agree with? In your world, under what circumstances would opposition like Antigone’s be justified? Is Creon's adamant belief in the purpose and power of the law ever justifiable? Do you think such a belief is a trait of a good ruler or a bad ruler? Support your opinions with reasons and examples from your life.

mattyboyy · Answer

MY RESPONSE

In my own opinnion, I believe that the purpose laws serve is to provide balance and peace within its desired area. However, I believe that all laws cannont be deemed justifiable just by the word of one man, woman, or nation. Some rules and laws, I wouldn't say are meant to be broken, but do set themselves up to fail. I believe that Creon's adamant belief in laws is justifiable but I strongly stand against the statement that disobedience to the law is the greatest evil. I also believe that Antigone's disobedience towards the law is justifed depening on the circumstance. Humans are rational and live alongside their own tendencies and ratonalities and depending on the circumatance, will react in a way they see fitting to resolve a solution. However, I do no believe in opposing laws just to oppose them. Again, laws were created to provide balance within the confines of a certain area and are meant to be followed. So, if you decided to be the contrary man or woman and oppose said laws, you will have to suffer whatever consequences that follow.

mattyboyy · Answer

I also know there are some grammatical errors lol

mattyboyy · Answer

But I do believe I get the point across correctly

mattyboyy · Answer

I have my correct and revised version if you wanna see it

anonymous · Answer

i like it think its good maybe change around your transitional phrases to something more interesting the detail is good

16shuston · Answer

I like it, it gets your point across, to a broad audience not to just a single person. Even though there are grammatical errors, i feel like your point is there and makes sense.