Question

Im sitting on my porch
With nothing in my head
Wondering what would happen
If i woke up dead

Wondering how a human heart
could hold in so much love
yet pour so much red

Like the blood that i bleed
When i let my skin scream
When i let myself go
When i forget how to dream

When the words swirl around
In the pit of my stomach
And i just want to drown
In a pit of atomic

Acid that flows from your mouth
Burning my skin
Sweat on my brow

Blinding my eyes
Making me cry
While i sit there on the porch
wondering when i would die

Answer 1

Because the life that i am living
Is not what i expected
Most of my thoughts are deadly
And my dreams are wicked

Wicked like the hands around my throat
And the smile on your face
Throw me in watch me float
Youve made a big mistake

Cuz once im dead
And youre alive
Ill haunt your thoughts
Dont try to hide
You sweet talked me
I know you lied
I shred my skin
I make you cry

hoo ha
Still waiting to die..........

Answer 2

Is this poem good? It is for my homework

Answer 3

yup but poems would go in the writing section.;)

Answer 4

How did you get this?!

Answer 5

she created it with ideas ;)

Answer 6

That is crazy! I just wrote something to similar!

Answer 7

I got it from different poems i read and put it all together

Answer 8

Wow! I literally just wrote something just like this.

Answer 9

Cool

Answer 10

Ya! @ first I thought it was mine, but then I realized it wasn't

Answer 11

Haha

Answer 12

Great mash-up of poems. It's really good!

Answer 13

Thanks i am starting to write some

Answer 14

That's really good! Keep it up.