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OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

A poem of MINE

OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

i'm lying in the bed i think im dead the entire room spins as i recount my sins i see visions of hell and tremble and yell praying for a miracle to remove my obstacle my heart skips a beat the voices say im dead meat i prepare myself saying g'bye to my health what torment awaits? what'll be my fate? i don't wanna know as long its fast- not slow' im drowning in guilt the gallows I've built the end is scarily near my body drenched in fear' im not feeling great' cant even think straight gotta be a way out i scream and shout lurching in the dark like zombies in the park feeling my nightmare trying to wipe it all away i fall down aghast tormented by my past regret chokes my tight tears stream down as i lose sight bound by the mental chains soaked by the river of pains i gather my self knowing no ones coming to help gotta free myself from this misery gotta rise up and shine gotta get feelin' fine gotta start up living again gotta start living again

OpenStudy (anonymous):

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OpenStudy (anonymous):

grate poem

OpenStudy (anonymous):

It's very nice ;)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

amazing poem <3 it

OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

thankyou.

OpenStudy (anna1448):

wow that was amazing :D very enjoyable to read

OpenStudy (anonymous):

wow its amazing nice job i love it

OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

Thankyou

OpenStudy (anonymous):

np and i bet my sis cant write one as good as urs

OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

that's kind of you, but im sure, she can

OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

i see.

OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

yes, please do.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok byeeeeeeeeeeeeee

OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

goodbye.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

amazing poem

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Very nice XD

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Wow, that was amazing :3

OpenStudy (anonymous):

86/100 Great poem.

OpenStudy (dominantvampire):

thank you, all of you @MLGgamer @EmoMuch?Yes. @epikenzie

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I love your picture.

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