Question

Here is a speed poem: havent posted anything on here in awhile. Tips/ Ideas would be loved

I will fight, for there is no flight,
I will fight this battle day and night.

For life is not over after the first mistake;
Or the first heartbreak.
After every darkness, there is daybreak.

So all of those, who are in need
Take my hand; and I will lead.

So sharpen your sword;
Break of the rust.
Chant your song, stomp off the dust.

For today we fight again;
In this bloody sand.

Answer 1

Fantastic work! This is amazing and very, well, inspirational to me! I hope you keep writing poems like this because you're great at this!

Answer 2

Thanks man, I have been writing all my life, so its nice to have some positive reinforcement.

Answer 3

You have a great talent!

Answer 4

Thank you.

Answer 5

Awesome Work!!!