Question

a song im writing so its not even remotely done... feedback?

Answer 1

im sorry... dont you hear me?!
im not a f*ucking princess!
so stop treating me like one!
this pain feels endless!
and im so f*ucking done!
you want me to pretend?
dont want me to be me?
but up till the end!
i will not be!
your little f*ucking angel!
going down to h*ell soon!
im in love with a devil!
he tried to give me the moon!
for my cooperation and loyalty!
never gonna try again!
im not who you want me to be!
and i cant deal with the pain!
this blade across my wrists!
a gun to my head!
your chest i beat with my fists!
i just want to be dead!
let me die!
let me die!
let me die!!
im not a f*ucking princess...

Answer 2

awesome!!! :D

Answer 3

I'm going to show my boyfriend this if you don't mind.. @Donblue

Answer 4

thank you very much

Answer 5

go ahead

Answer 6

i like the part
(in love with the devil)
mmm wonder who he is

Answer 7

gee.... i have no idea....

Answer 8

baby @Donblue

Answer 9

o.0

Answer 10

I liked it. And it's strange that it's like excatly like my life.

Answer 11

its dark and unique.. very interesting =3

Answer 12

thanks you very much :3

Answer 13

Oh..wow. That is super intense and very very dark.