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Revise the paragraph:An event that i will always remember special with my friends is taking a road trip too Miami Beach,Florida.When my friend Carlos told me two get up at 6:00 to get ready too go too Miami in the morning,I didn't believe him.But,I packed my clothes just in case.When we made it to Miami we couldn't stop looking at all the beautiful people their.It really felt like a vacation to get way from all the back home stress.It was so cool just to be stay in that environment four a couple of days.Our luck was good,but we where pulled over by the police on our way to South Beach.That kin

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Revise the paragraph:An event that i will always remember special with my friends is taking a road trip too Miami Beach,Florida.When my friend Carlos told me two get up at 6:00 to get ready too go too Miami in the morning,I didn't believe him.But,I packed my clothes just in case.When we made it to Miami we couldn't stop looking at all the beautiful people their.It really felt like a vacation to get way from all the back home stress.It was so cool just to be stay in that environment four a couple of days.Our luck was good,but we where pulled over by the police on our way to South Beach.That kind of killed my spirit,but I still kept my composure and we enjoyed a delicious dinner.The next morning I was feeling exhausted,and I really need a cup of coffee.I always told myself I'd go to Miami.Who new it would be so soon.It felt good being in Miami for a couple days,and I fall in love with Miami.I can't wait to go back.