Question

i had to write a song about world war one for history, i only have the chorus done right now. plz tell me what u think....

Answer 1

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blood shed that would leave a stain
drip drop, its the pouring rain
dead bodies everywhere
man they must of been scared
hear the gunshots coming fear
deep inside you feel the fear
here it is world war one
beginning of the war has just begun

Answer 2

near not fear...

Answer 3

i like it its good but its almost sounds like a poem

Answer 4

lol if you heard how the rythem is, u would understand lol

Answer 5

lol

Answer 6

thats whats up
i like it hun

Answer 7

thanks!

Answer 8

It's really good :)

Answer 9

I love it, teresa. I really like the emotion you capture in your work. Not just this one. All of them. You're very talented, and I'd absolutely love to see it get you somewhere. :)

Answer 10

I think you should add something like....
"Kids are crying"
"About their Fathers,Uncles dying"
"Can't you see that we~ Need to stop this fighting"

Answer 11

thanks @CallMeKiki ! @Afrodiddle i think i just might add some of that lol

Answer 12

You're welcome. :) I mean it all.

Answer 13

will you stop this pelletty music? what did i tell you? this music sucks.

Answer 14

please take ur comment off my page?

Answer 15

nah i want ppl to see

Answer 16

plz stop... i work hard on my songs

Answer 17

im only saying one more thing. if i were you, i would stop music, because u suck at it. im not kidding. just stop with the music, or else u r gonna make a bigger fool of ur self. the depression song sucked, and so did everything else. u suck to, wihth explains a lot! now dont be putting ur crappy songs on here, cause nobody wants to hear it, or even see it. goodbye! :D

Answer 18

fine, no more songs will be coming from me......

Answer 19

im sorry everyone, but i am no longer putting my songs on here, which in that cases gives me no reason to be on here, so i will say goodbye. i love u all, maybe i can find a better place to put my songs... @CallMeKiki @puppylove<3123 @puppylover0617 @puppylover52 @Phebe @Anastashia @Beyoncefan @DARTHVADER2900 @EmmanuelRocksYou @fallengoddess , etc......

Answer 20

have fun, and it was nice knowing u all

Answer 21

@Tazmaniadevil

Answer 22

teresar dont listen to him ur songs are amazing just ignore him

Answer 23

no, actually, he is right. i dont know why i was writing music. but he is correct, i need to find something better, and give up on music...

Answer 24

bye bye... maybe i can do something else.

Answer 25

deleate the post before u leave!

Answer 26

@Jonrooks @teresar7
Troll much? lol.
Why should she delete this song? It's great.
Honestly "Jonrooks" I can't take you seriously with your horrible spelling, grammar, and over use of the word "suck".
We might suck, but you swallow.
Please apply aloe to that burn.

Answer 27

@Leafy

Answer 28

@Leafy

Answer 29

@HunnyBunny6969

Answer 30

He a jackass dont listen to him @teresra7 he just a jerk