Question

Can someone look over my conclusion paragraph for my argumentative essay?

European involvement in Africa has since served to be calamitous in the development of the country since the beginning of colonization. Africa has been deteriorating industrially, culturally, psychologically, and medically. Many citizens in the country face a near constant fear of attack, death, torture, rape, theft, illness, and starvation as resources are becoming less and less available. It was so easy for the Europeans to develop a sense of superiority over the rest of the world, ....

Answer 1

... parts of it not even realizing that they were now inferior to these countries, and to sail into the continent with a supererogatory objective to save them from themselves. At some point in time, a country will develop the same motives, and deem it fit to save Africa again, or China, or America. History will repeat, always.

I can post my whole essay if needed, or e-mail it or share it with you on google docs, or whatever. I'd post it here, but it's five pages long and isn't 100% done with citations just yet

Answer 2

So I think it's pretty good. You just need your counterclaim, and rebuttal. I'm sure you have that. (: Btw, does it have to be 5 pages long?

Answer 3

It looks good so far, I'd put it all together and read through it

Answer 4

@misswinzeyyy Yeah i already have the counterclaim and rebuttle in the actual essay, do i need to remention it in my concluding paragraph? It doesn't have to be a certain length. The teacher says she doesn't want to force us to have a certain length, just long enough to cover all the material. There was a required 5 paragraphs, but I added two paragraphs into it and they were pretty long.