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Answer 1

can someone rephrase this paragragh

Answer 2

Online relationships do no build very stable, real, or strong relationships. Online we get a different view of a person, if we only meet them online instead of personally or "in real", we get so comfortable speaking to them in that manner. When we finally get to meet them in person we often get uncomfortable and a bit disappointed. We are so used to talking to people through chats and texting that it is impossible to be the same person you are online while talking to them face-to-face.

Answer 3

hope thats okay

Answer 4

thanks alot

Answer 5

no problem!

Answer 6

@pokiedokie can u please help me add 10 more sentences

Answer 7

i have to make it longer

Answer 8

talking about the same topic

Answer 9

okay is there anything in particular you want to address in the next 10 sentences??

Answer 10

yes i want to talk about how technology makes us feel lonelier

Answer 11

i want to make this paragraph to talk about the disadvantage as in technology makes us feel lonelier cause all my argumentitive essay is about how technology makes us feel lonelier i have to rephrase it as an disadvantage that technology makes us feel lonelier

Answer 12

and i wanna include that if we have weak relationship it will cause us to feel lonely and isolated ----no friends

Answer 13

@pokiedokie

Answer 14

This is good so far but are you supposed to write just one paragraph or are we going to combine those two ideas into one? if we're making two different paragraphs we can address it in the next one

Answer 15

okay, just 10 more sentences right? just give me a few minutes to make some

Answer 16

yes 1 paragraph cause i want this whole paragraph talking about how technology makes us feel lonelier

Answer 17

yes 10 more sentences

Answer 18

i wanna begin it that the second reason tech makes us lonelier....

Answer 19

i have to explain why does it makes us feel more isolated and lonelier

Answer 20

oh okay, so then we're combing. got it

Answer 21

yes

Answer 22

i was only able to come up with 6 more sentences

Answer 23

Second, the disadvantage of depending on technological devices all the time is the fact that online relationships do no build very stable, real, or strong relationships. Online we get a different view of a person, if we only meet them online instead of personally or "in real", we get so comfortable speaking to them in that manner. When we finally get to meet them in person we often get uncomfortable and a bit disappointed. We are so used to talking to people through chats and texting that it is impossible to be the same person you are online while talking to them face-to-face. ***Our online friends don’t give us the company as a friend we have seen and know personally. This is why friendships made through the internet are weak and easily breakable. We as humans need contact of face-to-face to truly understand and bond with someone, without it, we feel lonely knowing they are not truly the person we think they are. Being on the internet all day isolates from human contact and eventually, we will become lonely. The result of loneliness is being gullible and putting too much trust in someone, or being isolated and feeling trust towards no one. This proves that technology is a huge disadvantage for social matters and making friends.

Answer 24

the stars are where the new sentences were put in

Answer 25

omg really thanks for helping me i really appreciate it

Answer 26

no problem!

Answer 27

@pokiedokie

Answer 28

can u help me coming with a third reason why it makes us feel lonelier

Answer 29

ahhh, sure. i can try and think of a few things

Answer 30

heres me essay

Answer 31

now i wrote 2 reasons

Answer 32

btw its an argumentative essay

Answer 33

alright, got ya, give me a minute or two

Answer 34

wow! it seems pretty good so far, but i can't really think of any other reasons than:

the distance of internet friendships/relationships
or maybe that even that with loved ones we ignore them for technology

Answer 35

wait can i give u a reason and u write me a paragraph please

Answer 36

that u will less care about life we don't spend time with people we love and our family we will not be able to solve real life problems

Answer 37

i don't want to repeat sentences and same topic i wrote in the upper paragraphs

Answer 38

yeah, that's pretty good. i'm pretty busy at the moment tho, so what's the minimum of sentences i can do in the paragraph?

Answer 39

its ok even though after 3 hours or 2 hours

Answer 40

but i need a different reasons than the ones i wrote

Answer 41

alright, i'll do that but when is your paper due and what is the minimum sentences i can do? 5 or 6 sentences?

Answer 42

its due after 2 days

Answer 43

u can send it to me any time

Answer 44

its ok tmw

Answer 45

but i need a paragraph

Answer 46

okay i'll just do it right now and leave it here then because i usually wake up really late

Answer 47

give me a few minutes

Answer 48

oh ok thanks its ok take your time send it to me tmw late its ok

Answer 49

Technology is extremely addictive in this generation, especially for young adults. Since young adults are so susceptible to things that can be addictive, it’s obvious that online relationships can harm their social skills and life. They will begin to ignore everything around them including the following: family members, friends, responsibilities, and basic needs in everyday life. Families, friendships, and relationships can become a disaster due to technology overrunning the world. This addiction can develop in the young adult losing the relationships they have in front of them, making them lonelier than ever. They may not even realize the harm that technology can place upon their daily lives, teens may think that they are less lonely with the company of their new online friends. Yet, when it all comes down, the only ones left for them are the people “in real”.

Answer 50

hope it's okay! im kinda sleepy right now