Should I continue with what I have so far or start over completely?

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anonymous · Answer

is it multiple choice?

anonymous · Answer

The effects that the experience had on her was it taught her to control he emotions, to be patient and not to yell at customers, and that you have to work hard and follow the book if you want to get to the top.

anonymous · Answer

Some of the main causes of those effects are being burned by the grill, being yelled at by customers, and getting raises and promotions.

destinyyyy · Answer

Okay. Are you saying I should revise what I have or start over with what you said as examples

anonymous · Answer

ohhh sorry i read your question wrong i though that you ment that you had to read that paragraph about the mcdonalds thing and answer the questions. No, your paragraph is perfect I think you will get a very good grade, i didnt read the essay in the book but your paragraph answers the questions very well.

destinyyyy · Answer

Lol thats okay. Thank you.. Now I just have to make it 150 words :/

anonymous · Answer

woah

destinyyyy · Answer

Yeah. I have 97 so far

anonymous · Answer

well good luck! :)

destinyyyy · Answer

Thank you :)