Question

Friend

A person who care about you,
A person who knows about you,
A person who understands you,
A person who does everything for you,
A person who loves you,
A person who is always there for you,
A person who guides you,protects you.
Then that person is to be called your best friend.

Friend to whom you can share,trust and learn the beauty of life.
So once you find that person in your life, just remember you have another life with you.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Please comment :)

Answer 3

~claps~ bravaaaaaa!!!

Answer 4

thank you dear

Answer 5

^-^ np hun.

Answer 6

:P

Answer 7

love it!

Answer 8

thank you so much @Mad17 , SFB

Answer 9

np lol:)

Answer 10

cool .well done

Answer 11

thx

Answer 12

personally im not a big fan of repetition

Answer 13

Just add an "s" to the end of care in the first line :)
Also, try rephrasing "Then that person is to be called your best friend." It doesn't flow quite as well as it could.
Maybe try making it more impactful and stright forward like:
"This, this, is a person worthy to be called "best friend' "

Erm..the rest is really nice. The last paragraph is also a little rough:
"Friend to whom you can share,trust and learn the beauty of life.
So once you find that person in your life, just remember you have another life with you. "

Try:
"This is a friend with whom you can discover the beauty of life
a person whom you can trust
Once you find that person in your life,
just remember: you have another life with you"

I'm unsure as to what the last line means but it's my favorite part xD
Just a few suggestions!

Answer 14

lol @Babynini
but yeah i like your corrections :)
Thank you so much dear

Answer 15

Great job! :D

Answer 16

thanks @CallMeKiki

Answer 17

Anytime c: