Question

Should I keep going with what I have so far or start over?

Answer 1

Yes! Continue! I am a cheerleader, so I really LOVE what you have so far.
Oh! One thing: I don't know what "thoughs" means, so I think you may have meant "those." :)

Answer 2

hm, that's a good intro. Do you have an outline? That will help a lot :) I can help you come up with one if you don't have one

Answer 3

No I dont. Okay thank you that would be a great help.. And im super bad at creating thesis statements :/

Answer 4

It's all good :)
Ok, so, first off the topic of this essay is: "what are the advantages to competetive sports"
Since your topic is cheerleading, what are some advantages to competing in cheerleading?

Answer 5

Think of 3 and we'll go from there!

Answer 6

physical, team building, leadership, and confidence.

Answer 7

Fabulous!! Let's work with this. So 500 words is about enough for an intro, three main points, and a conclusion.

Answer 8

Forget about the intro right now, k? Let's work on the body.

Answer 9

Okay :)

Answer 10

The 3 main points you just gave me are:
The advantages of cheerling are:
1) Physical fitness and health
2) Encourages strong friendships and team building
3) Builds confidence

Answer 11

Okay.. What about leadership?

Answer 12

oo good one, em, that can go with confidence maybe.

For each of those 3 points I want you to answer these questions.

1) Why is this good to have?
2) how does cheerling help with this?
3) how will this be helpful in the future, after cheerleading?

Answer 13

Sorry I took long xD I was trying to make thought-provoking questions haha Does that make sense?

Answer 14

Are you asking why is it good to have cheerleading? O.o

Answer 15

so for example number 1.
1) One advantage of cheerling is physical fitness and health
- It's important to have physical fitness and health because ____
- Cheerling helps with this because it ____
- Physical fitness and health will be helpful in the future because ___

Answer 16

Well the question is what are the advantages of it. So yeah, why is it good. But for each of the 3 main points you gave me. Does that make sense?

Answer 17

Um im not sure

Answer 18

Hrm give me a moment.

Answer 19

Okay

Answer 20

here's your outline :) Keep it if you like but if it doesn't work for you it's completely ok to ditch it! It should be fairly easy to get 500 words from this if you just anwer 2 sentences or so for each question. and have your intro and conclusion

Answer 21

Okay thank you

Answer 22

You're welcome! If you would like me to proof read the final draft just tag me :) Good luck. I hope that's helpful!

Answer 23

Okay I will :) Thank you again.