Question

Can someone proofread what I have so far and remove somethings? My essay has to be 400-500 words.. Thank you

Answer 1

I have over 600 and my into is not complete and I haven't started my conclusion.

Answer 2

@Babynini

Answer 3

What grade level?

Answer 4

woah! see how much an outline can help :D nicely done. There are some things that could be changed just to make it an even BETTER essay. When is this due? I don't have time to proof read right now.

Answer 5

Where is it? I can help now

Answer 6

aii sorry i'm flooded with homework :( Have you tried asking your mum or dad to proof read it?

Answer 7

or friend :P

Answer 8

I dont have any one..

Answer 9

hrm. Ok, well...upload the essay in the form of a word document that way when someone is able to help they'll have it instead of having to wait for you to get on :)

Answer 10

@Lifeisadangerousgame

Answer 11

Ill just figure it out on my own. I posted another question asking for help on a thesis.

Answer 12

thesis statement*