Question

i finished writing my argumentative essay but then the paragraph before the last the paragraph its solutions to my problem and the teacher didn't like the fact but she was like i can add the solutions in between my body paragraphs and the before the last paragraph i have to do another main point can u help me

Answer 1

@Octoknightx

Answer 2

@fallenangelorchid

Answer 3

@fallenangelorchid can u help me?

Answer 4

I'll see what I can do, post your argumentative essay. =)

Answer 5

Wow great job on your final essay. And to get this right, she wants you to put in a solution for how much teens are attached to technology? 'Find a way to get teens 'unhooked' from the internet and get them out of isolation?'

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no did u see the paragraph that i highlighted

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she wants me to add another main point rather than the solution she told in the argumentative essay we don't put solutions

Answer 8

Oh alright.

Answer 9

she told me u can add the solutions in betweens the upper paragraphs

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so i really need your help please cause im stuck i really don't know how to come with another idea

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and how to put the solutions in between the paragraphs

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i would really appreciate your help

Answer 13

Ok =) We'll get through this.

Answer 14

ok thanks alooooott

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@AlicaIsCray

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Bish wai ._.

Answer 17

?

Answer 18

That was for @fallenangelorchid -_-

Answer 19

Lemme look at your essay real quick

Answer 20

ok

Answer 21

Alright so you need help finding a NEW main idea? You can't just take out the points from inside the essay? Btw which paragraph is it? The highlighted portion?

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yes its the highlighted

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i have to put the highlighted paragraph in between the other paragraphs and do another paragraph with a new main point

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lol...Well umm...You seem to know what you have to do lol
Make a new point about elders getting accustomed to technology or something lol

Answer 25

i want help doing that

Answer 26

In which way? You can put your paragraph between third and 4rth paragraph
And putting in the spot of the old one...Which topic do you think you should put?

Answer 27

no in between the paragraph(solutions) and do another paragraph with another main point

Answer 28

I am so confused rn ._.

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do u see the highlighted para

Answer 30

i can earthier rephrase it in a way to not make it as a solution paragraph

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or write a new paragraph with a new main point

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and put the highlighted para in between other paragraphs

Answer 33

I'm sorry I'm not getting it T^T
@dan815 @Goku-Kai @hba @jagr2713 @k_lynn please help lol

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can u help me @Phebe

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@AlicaIsCray no one wants to help

Answer 36

@lilshane