Question

I Finished the song!!! feed back please!!!

Answer 1

World war one song!

blood shed that would leave a stain
drip drop, its the pouring rain
dead bodies everywhere
man they must of been scared
hear the gunshots coming near
deep inside you feel the fear
here it is world war one
beginning of the war has just begun (2X)

It was a cold and windy night
people had to tell their family goodbye
they were chosen to go to war
it’ll be the same no more
war was voted against Serbia
by Austria-Hungary in europe
Allied was our side and central was theirs
the “great war” it was declared

blood shed that would leave a stain
drip drop, its the pouring rain
dead bodies everywhere
man they must of been scared
hear the gunshots coming near
deep inside you feel the fear
here it is world war one
beginning of the war has just begun(2X)

bombs and poisonous gases from plains
all you hear is crying of pain
guns and tanks and people dying
all around you can hear them crying
Wilson promised to keep us out of war to be safe
but changed his mind when allied needed help from the states
new strategies, and new weapons
made the war even more threaten

blood shed that would leave a stain
drip drop, its the pouring rain
dead bodies everywhere
man they must of been scared
hear the gunshots coming near
deep inside you feel the fear
here it is world war one
beginning of the war has just begun(2X)

the war was deadly as it could have gotten
over 9 million killed and over 13 million wounded.
the war was based on power and land
but in the end the depression began

blood shed that would leave a stain
drip drop, its the pouring rain
dead bodies everywhere
man they must of been scared
hear the gunshots coming near
deep inside you feel the fear
here it is world war one
beginning of the war has just begun(2X)

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Its good :)
I like it!
Was this for school?

Answer 4

yes, for history class

Answer 5

Seems good :)
I wish u the best of luck for it :D

Answer 6

This made me teary-eyed! But good job in the making of it, its awwsum! 10/10

Answer 7

I love it, especially all of the emotion

Answer 8

thx, i already sung it, and wow i got a lot of ppl (even ppl who bullies me) tell me it was great!

Answer 9

great song it brought tears 2 my eyes it is beutiful

Answer 10

thanks guys!

Answer 11

welcome captain

Answer 12

u guys dont know how much this all means to me

Answer 13

my guess is more then alot

Answer 14

ya lolol

Answer 15

Don't mass tag.

Answer 16

the heak is a mass tag??

Answer 17

idk lol

Answer 18

When you tag that many people..

Answer 19

ok she didnt want to post like nine comments before anyone shows up

Answer 20

Whatever.

Answer 21

ok i am gonna go now bye

Answer 22

bye..... thanks @creegan

Answer 23

welcome captain

Answer 24

wow its amazing i love it

Answer 25

<3

Answer 26

@Tazmaniadevil i have to add u to this lol

Answer 27

lolololololol =D

Answer 28

XD

Answer 29

Grate song!

Answer 30

awsome

Answer 31

thx!!!!!

Answer 32

so how did u come up with this

Answer 33

all of my songs just comes to me.

Answer 34

I love it!

Answer 35

:D thank you!