Question

My song, feedback appreciated!! :)

~~Strong~~

I don't know where I should be
But I know that you should be with me
I could sing my heart out in a song

And maybe I could give sing to you tonight
Maybe we could stare at the moonlight
get a couple drinks, Go to the brink of the lake
Jump in, get wet,
Have fun, win a bet
I know you don't know
but
Chorus
I want you to love me like you know you can
I want you to kiss me to my favorite band
I want to love you all night long
Cause baby our love is stronger than your strong arms, (That hold me all night..)
Cause our love is stronger than the angels above, (making our life just right)
Baby our love is Strong

Maybe we can work something out
Maybe I can stop thinking about you
Maybe I can scream and shout
Your name from the top of the world
Knowing your mine
And I can kiss ya anytime

All I gotta do is hear the magic "yes.."

*repeat chorus*

Answer 1

i love it good job :)

Answer 2

Thank you! Cx

Answer 3

welcome :D

Answer 4

@Donblue Its corny but its for you

Answer 5

<3

Answer 6

great song

Answer 7

could use some work, but it looks good.

Answer 8

good job