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OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

Can someone help me get started with this essay? I will metal and fan. Thank you

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

I have to write a four paragraph essay with a maximum of 700 words. Its a definition/example essay. I chose the word beauty for my topic word. It must be in a 3rd person objective view. Only two body paragraphs. Are these good body paragraph topics? Conventional beauty- low body image can lead into odd thoughts of what real beauty is, (causing self harm/hate/eating disorders,etc) Beauty standards- low body image in teenage girls because of those standards, unrealistic expectation (Disney princesses having waist sizes that look like their necks) Im not sure how to start the essay. Please help

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Start your essay out with a statement, your statement can be the definition of Conventional beauty. Than add on to that.

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

Okay :) .. Any ideas on a thesis statement??

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Real Beauty In the world today, the media makes it hard for a girl to be comfortable with her body. Society, in general, persuades young women to feel that any size above a two is too big.

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

Is that the thesis or intro?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Intro

OpenStudy (anonymous):

But the thesis restates the intro so take that intro and restate it in different words for your thesis.

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

Um okay

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