Question

Can someone proofread my essay? Please. I will metal and fan

Answer 1

@Afrodiddle @Babynini

Answer 2

That was amazing! I didn't see anything wrong!

Answer 3

Oh thank you.. Any ideas on where I can add 172 words??

Answer 4

Not really :/ Can I get a medal?

Answer 5

Um sure.

Answer 6

i like it @Destinyyyy

Answer 7

can u help me plz

Answer 8

Thank you.. Did you see anywhere that I could add more words?

Answer 9

Sorry but im not good with poems.. At all :/

Answer 10

um no actually i think it's great the way it is but i can read it over if u want add see if u can

Answer 11

Please if you could that would be great. I have to add 172

Answer 12

172 words

Answer 13

ok and can u help me

Answer 14

I can try but im horrible with poems. I dont understand them

Answer 15

ok

Answer 16

Do you have any ideas on what you want it to be about?

Answer 17

If you find somewhere to add a word can you put something in front of it so I know its a new word

Answer 18

um bout the sun

Answer 19

HELLO DESTINYYYY

Answer 20

Hi

Answer 21

hella bomb conclusion! Well done!

Answer 22

Thank you :) I need more words though

Answer 23

hey so did the restating the main idea for the conclusion advice help??

Answer 24

Kind of lol

Answer 25

can i have a medal?? for helping destinyyyy?

Answer 26

Yes sorry I thought I did already

Answer 27

ok

Answer 28

@nanc888 do you see anywhere that I can add 172 words?

Answer 29

I honestly liked it and I think its great the way it is but if you need to add more words, you can probably add more specific details. If you can do you think you can help me

Answer 30

sorry i wasn't much help

Answer 31

I can try to help you.. Could you help me with the thesis.. I think I did mine wrong. The teacher wants this -- It should include your subjective definition of the topic (your focus) as well as include a preview of the two areas you will use for the development of your two body paragraphs.

Answer 32

okay ill try. @Destinyyyy

Answer 33

Thank you