Boost yourself
When you're sad,
Don't go mad,
Don't be bad,
Be the good lad.

Sad is a feeling,
which needs a healing,
Through the dealings,
Of your living.

So put on your arms,
Get ready for the race,
Go out to the world,
Live it! Like it! Love it!

Please share your thoughts :)

Question

Boost yourself
When you're sad,
Don't go mad,
Don't be bad,
Be the good lad.

Sad is a feeling,
which needs a healing,
Through the dealings,
Of your living.

So put on your arms,
Get ready for the race,
Go out to the world,
Live it! Like it! Love it!

Please share your thoughts :)

rvc · Answer

@paki @divu.mkr @SyedMohammed98 @Science_ALLY @ispike @Babynini @isry98 @danish071996 @Phebe

youngstudier · Answer

That's a good poem, you should keep at it! ^_^

rvc · Answer

Thank you @YoungStudier

anonymous · Answer

personally im not big into rhyming. I feel like rhyming holds back a lot of potential for a piece. the poem itself is good but this is more of a personal preference.

rvc · Answer

thanks @ispike 


@sugarplum15

anonymous · Answer

It's beautifull.

babynini · Answer

hm, that is not my favorite.

anonymous · Answer

I like this! It's simple, but it's really good, and I like that it's something you could continue to build on :D

rvc · Answer

thanks @Slacker @sugarplum15 
well okay @Babynini

petiteme · Answer

Live it! Like it! Love it!

rvc · Answer

@CanadianSteve99

canadiansteve99 · Answer

It's amazing man!
You're great at this! Are you going to do more?