Question

I wrote this stanza to the hymn "What a friend we have in Jesus"
I have have known so much worry
and I have met with much temptations
but Jesus Christ is not a story
He has died for all my sin
take to him all your trouble
tell him all about your pain
where has your tongue so wandered?
take it to our lord in prayer

Answer 1

Nice. Very nicely done

Answer 2

Great job! You are amazing!

Answer 3

Thank you, both. :) I plan of writing a punk version of this song once I find a good drum track.

Answer 4

i liked it
keep it up :)