Question

can someone correct my argumentative essay

Answer 1

Where is it? I will be on most of the day... I cannot answer it but I can give you Ideas to complete it.

Answer 2

no i need someone to check my essay not to complete it

Answer 3

Okay...ok

Answer 4

thanks a lot

Answer 5

Looks fine to me and I am great at essay's...Just skimming through it gives me tears of joy... :)::::: What do you think is wrong with it?

Answer 6

@sanra123

Answer 7

?

Answer 8

i think the conclusion isn't summing my essay

Answer 9

i just want u to look for sentence fluency

Answer 10

and grammer and punctuation

Answer 11

OK...It will take awhile...But it looks fine to me.

Answer 12

ok thank u

Answer 13

I just finished it ''fast reader'' and your punctuation is perfect, all of the commas are in the right place. Your sentence fluency is fine, i'd just try to work on the run-on sentences by shortening them, and erasing words that are not needed.

Answer 14

thanks a lot cause in my conclusion my friend told me i have long sentences

Answer 15

When I typed ''fast reader'' I almost typed ''fat reader'' I can't stop laughing at that.

Answer 16

hahahahahhahahahha

Answer 17

Its OK when formal writers like you, try too hard to be exact, the words kind of come out wrong. But I loved it nonetheless.

Answer 18

thanks a lot for your encouragement

Answer 19

@BasilisHolmes33 did u correct it?

Answer 20

@BasilisHolmes33

Answer 21

@skullpatrol

Answer 22

Looks good to me :)

Answer 23

really

Answer 24

can u correct my conclusion

Answer 25

@gamer56

Answer 26

@Catseyeglint911 I think this person can help you better with that, Then i can.

Answer 27

@gamer56 i know right it looks amazing.

Answer 28

thanks a lot but i think it needs to be fixed or not?