can someone correct my argumentative essay
Where is it? I will be on most of the day... I cannot answer it but I can give you Ideas to complete it.
no i need someone to check my essay not to complete it
Okay...ok
thanks a lot
Looks fine to me and I am great at essay's...Just skimming through it gives me tears of joy... :)::::: What do you think is wrong with it?
@sanra123
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i think the conclusion isn't summing my essay
i just want u to look for sentence fluency
and grammer and punctuation
OK...It will take awhile...But it looks fine to me.
ok thank u
I just finished it ''fast reader'' and your punctuation is perfect, all of the commas are in the right place. Your sentence fluency is fine, i'd just try to work on the run-on sentences by shortening them, and erasing words that are not needed.
thanks a lot cause in my conclusion my friend told me i have long sentences
When I typed ''fast reader'' I almost typed ''fat reader'' I can't stop laughing at that.
hahahahahhahahahha
Its OK when formal writers like you, try too hard to be exact, the words kind of come out wrong. But I loved it nonetheless.
thanks a lot for your encouragement
@BasilisHolmes33 did u correct it?
@BasilisHolmes33
@skullpatrol
Looks good to me :)
really
can u correct my conclusion
@gamer56
@Catseyeglint911 I think this person can help you better with that, Then i can.
@gamer56 i know right it looks amazing.
thanks a lot but i think it needs to be fixed or not?
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