Question

poem please give honest opinions and responses

Answer 1

We can let the world control us
But who wants to live the life of another man’s hypocrisy?
It’s a fight to be ourselves in a world where we’re told to be anything else.
And its hard to do this.
not because of the battle scars
But because were trying to fight for someone that we’re still figuring out.
How are you supposed to fight for the unknown?
It’s easier to be told who we are
Than to figure it out ourselves.
So sometimes we give in and sometimes were on a quest
With endless battles.
We have to fight devils of the world as much as ourselves.
Even the desert gets in the way.
But still we have to keep fighting
Because if not, what do we have left?
Its not hard for someone to take what you barely had.
Which is why we build a stronger grip.
Because fighting endless battles
Is better than giving into someone else’s insecurities
So you can just be a trophy for their claim.
I am not a court gesture for the queen of hearts.
Because I have my own heart to save.
And so do you.
We cannot be ourselves in the shadows of someone else.
We can only hope to figure it out and dream.
Create a vision, imagine that vision, but don’t forget to pursue it.
Or else you’re just another pedestal for the queens and kings of the world.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Your incredible!! I love this so much!!!

Answer 4

I love what you write. It's amazing!!!

Answer 5

It's really good :) I like it

Answer 6

@rikkibracamonte1999 lol thank you so much

Answer 7

@bakonloverk im so glad thanks

Answer 8

@HWBUSTER00 @leahhhmorgannn @Slacker @sugarplum15

Answer 9

You're best work yet!

Answer 10

@Slacker lol thanks

Answer 11

@butterflydreamer @fallenangelorchid @k_lynn @sugarplum15 @teresar7

Answer 12

i love it! its so true, and the words r powerful. i would love to hear more from you!

Answer 13

@teresar7 lol thanks im so glad

Answer 14

My biggest worry is that it might be a little cliche

Answer 15

its my pleasure!

Answer 16

I don't think you need to worry about this being cliche. While yes, fighting against the world is something that is frequently addressed in writing, you tackle the topic well and originally. Well done.

Answer 17

@geneticrockhopper247 thank you