Question

Really nervous about this one, but I could really use some feedback. :)


You got that cash flow,
That tiptoe,
That trick blow,
That status quo,
The way you're living, you'll end up damn low.
And I'm using that word correctly, you're tryna damn yourself to a cell.
Be careful bro.. or you could damn yourself to hell.
That's a place where we can't hear you yell.
Are you gonna change? Well that's hard to tell.

Answer 1

its good, I like it