Question

Feed back please. this is a song i made about a year or two ago. its my first love song lol

Answer 1

It’s Called Love

there you go walking
by again
with that handsome
boyish grin
and as you walk on by
you look straight at me
and i can see your eyes as blue as the sea
you take a piece of my heart
as you walk on by
and i feel as tho im gonna fall
when you're by my side

i think it’s called looove, looove
i think it’s called looove
loooooove when i look at you
when i look at you, yeah

you turn around and you
talk to me
ask me how i am
i say i’m fine do you
want some tea
and that’s how we began
there we are sitting there laughing
to all your jokes
when you start to leave
i start crying
cause heaven knows

i think it’s called looove, looove
i think it’s called looove
loooooove when i look at you

there we are we
set the date
we’re getting married on the
4th of May
you lift up my vail and you
smile so sweetly
you kiss me once then you
say to me

it’s called looove, looove
i know it’s called looove
looooove when i look at you

i think it’s called looove, looove
i think it’s called looove
loooooove when i look at you.

Answer 2

@timo619

Answer 3

it sucks and so do u! lmao keep ur pellet off of here, and keep ur ugly azz out too. or do i have to make another trip up there and kick ur azz again?

Answer 4

leave me alone, and delete the comment!

Answer 5

@Jonrooks wtf is a pellet?! Just leave her alone. If you can write better then please do so. -_- This was amazing @teresar7 just ignore @jonrooks.

Answer 6

thanks..... im fine....

Answer 7

i meant sh*t but this stupid cite wont say it

Answer 8

@Jonrooks Do you feel better? Belittling someone's art that they worked on and she put it up here for people to critique and appreciate not for people like you who just want to cause pain. Saying you don't like something is okay, but purposely hurting someone for no reason is just childish. @teresar7 it is a very nice song. My fist love song wasn't even close to being as good as this.. xD

Answer 9

thanks....... but i have to take it down....

Answer 10

Why?

Answer 11

Why?

Answer 12

cause i was told to...

Answer 13

By Hick?

Answer 14

no

Answer 15

By whom then?

Answer 16

its nothing....

Answer 17

Did this post break any rules? As far as I know original work is allowed

Answer 18

no it doesnt break any rules...

Answer 19

@TheSadGirl

Answer 20

nice job teresa. dont take this down. its really good! Jon leave her alone, u did enough!

Answer 21

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