Question

Closing song in 1 minute!!! Plz check out my lyrics this is still an unfinished song but give me ur opinion on this new song by me. These lyrics are inspired from personal experience may take a minute to post

Answer 1

Guys okay so here is my song. Its called Spilled Ink. :
I took a pen , filled it with ink. Color was black , not pink.
These verses are deep .These will make you think.
I have gone into the death abyss. And here i have appeared.
These verses are meant to go slow , as slow as Royce da 5'9 's flow.
I heard your foot got stuck in a snow , bro ? Stop creating a row.
These spilling ink forms a story on the floor below.
Haters thinking i am loosing hope , but that's just my flow.
These spilling ink says an unwanted story behind it.
Its not something a normal person would predict.
Sometimes , i can't rely on myself , i sometimes get enclosed in my own shell.
To write these verses i was compelled , by my pen.
To prove myself i just need a studio , to prove that i am worth a guy to defend.
Sometimes rules i have bend , too much money i have spent.
These things i could never mend , i am not a responsible guy . This is what i meant.
When this inks stop spilling , these words will stop rhyming.
I was awake , but inside i was always dreaming.
To all these haters , all these fears i am overcoming.
Its just a weird verse going nowhere , feather i will payback , i swear.
These scars remind me that the past is real. feather you will not be spared.
For too long i have been depressed , to face this i bet you are unprepared.
You better kill yourself , i recommend.
Words and rhymes i have connected. To get this moment , for too long i have waited.

Answer 2

me likey

Answer 3

thx @username240