Question

Will Medal
5.10 A Powerful Product (FLVS English I Course.)

Answer 1

A Powerful Product Worksheet
1. Revise and edit your argument. Then paste your entire final draft in the space below.


Parents ban books because they think it's corrupting their kids mind from reality such as, magic, past, and books. These are the main stuff kids love nowadays, magic wands, learning about their past and how books were banned in the past, but most of them involves kids ages 10 and up plus teenagers. Now parents are doing something to stop the kids from reading books and expanding their imagination. The parent's don't want their kids to have bigger imagination but believe it or not, the bigger your imagination is the bigger you can make great deals in life as you grow up from Pre-K, Elementary, Middle School, High School, and then College. Sometimes using imagination is a good thing in College and when you have to improve something then they can read books and kind of put their imagination in it and mix it all together . However some parents let their children read books, like Harry Potter, The Giver, and Fahrenheit 451 because of the foul language it has inside the book. But it doesn't matter what matters is that when you read a book you know who you are. This is why books shouldn't be banded because your kids will have a stronger imagination and therefore we shouldn't banded books.



2. Write a one-paragraph reflection on your revision process. Answer these questions in your paragraph:
What steps did you follow to revise and edit your argument?
Who did you consult for help in the process?
What type of errors did you correct more than others? Spelling? Punctuation? Sentence Structure?
What makes your final argument better than your first draft?
The sandwich step. I tried to do it on my onw, knwoing that I'll be graded into the effort I put it in. I corrected spelling, some words was not written correctly so I went back and correct them. That my final draf is more better than the other one because I fixed everything that needed to be fixed and explained why I think books should not be bannded, in my opipion of course.

Answer 2

@NeonStrawsForever
Can you help me again please?

Answer 3

Sure.

Answer 4

The question is up over there. This is what I have to do.

Answer 5

I don't see where you answer the second question.

Answer 6

The part where it said sandwitch step.

Answer 7

Sadly , that doesn't answer the question.
Consult: to seek advice or information from; ask guidance from

Answer 8

Example: Your father, a website, etc.

Answer 9

You can say "no one".

Answer 10

*no one.