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Hi everyone!!
Need help with my racial discrimination essay

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So basically I am writting a essay on injustice issue which I choose is racial discrimination

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Quit mass tagging

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what do you need help in?

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I need help with my thesis statement

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Well i can help you.

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oh really

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Please Don't Include Me In Your Mass Tagging.

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First, you must WRITE a theses statement. Go!! Many can help after that. None can help before that. It must be YOUR thesis statement.

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Can someone plz help me with my essay

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Plz

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You're not listening.

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hey
I already find the thesis statement

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"Find"? What does that even mean? Did you write one or didn't you? Have you something meaningful to talk about?

There is not a recipe. What do YOU think? Start writing. It doesn't matter even if garbage comes out. You can fix it, later. Just start writing!!

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but do you have any email account where I will show u my thesis

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No, that will not be happening.

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If you can post pertinent excerpts, that might be fine, here.

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ok so my first thesis statement be The racism is what create a negative effects on the people of different cultures

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Is it be right

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but My essay is quite different I guess but Idk how to show you

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I try to attach a file but its not working Idk why

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that's why I just ask for your email address

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is anyone here who can help me with my essay structure

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plz

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@TobleroneJesus

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You must communicate parts of it. You can't just beg and shout.

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do you look at my thesis

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ok so my first THESIS STATEMENT be The racism is what create a negative effects on the people of different cultures

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@tkhunny I know you can't help me

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@confluxepic

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Thesis statement: Blah blah blah because of Reason, Reason2, and Reason3.

Your thesis statement is lacking reasons. T. Khunny can help and attempt you help but refused to utilize his help.

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@GreenCat i never refused his help thou

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I think he don't have any idea what to write

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He tried to but you refused his help so he stopped. A wise man knows a hopeless case when he sees one.

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first of all he tell me to creat my own thesis statement but when i type here then he never reply

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i don't call it help thou

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In this case, it was hopeless trying to get you to accept his help.

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i also pm him but he never reply

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i try to take his help but he don't even write a single commant on my thesis statement

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its not a help @GreenCat

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can someone plz help me

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@MTALHAHASSAN2 first off this needs to be in writing and second people can NOT help with this kind of stuff because its YOUR thesis not someone elses so people can not help with this oh and don't mass tag people its against the CoC

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@xX_GamerGirl_Xx hey dear I know they can't help me with it but they can also give me some suggestions

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Taking suggestion is also against law

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well i guess you are right so ok then what are u spose to write about maybe i can help?

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taking help with essay structure is also against law

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If u help me with structure then that be great

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I want to attach a document here but its not working

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do you have a any social website where I can send you that

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oh just click [Attach File] button that should work and if that doesnt work u can send it my email or something

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I try to do that but its not working Idk why

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I will send u on ur email

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wait just copy and paste this we can use that : https://titanpad.com/hwkprOk2vP

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ok sure and thnx

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no problem! :D

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lol how can we use that

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lol just copy and paste what ever u r trying to show me

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but its a pic

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https://titanpad.com/hwkprOk2vP

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Not being rude - just honest and direct.

"one of the most" doesn't mean anything.

"terrible problems" -- Is there a list of these? This is histrionics.

"racial discrimination" = "judge by skin color" -- That's just not correct. There are Pacific Islanders far darker than many Africans.

Okay, you start talking about "Racial" discrimination, but immediately branch out to color, nationality, and ethnicity. Very confusing. Also, "descent" is the same as "racial". Calling it something else doesn't make it two things.

"spread like a deadly virus" -- You'll have to prove that.

Racism began with slave trade? -- Very doubtful. Rethink this point.

You are entirely overlooking what I said early. There ARE good reasons to differentiate by race. Medical History is one of them. You are saying that all doctors will eventually feel bad because they have extracted a good family history. This is simply false. These doctors should be thanked for doing their jobs correctly. You MUST be more specific when speaking of discrimination. It is NOT a blanket event.

You seem to be jumping time periods. When was the last time you saw a Whites Only public restroom?

"causes a lot of big problems" -- This means nothing. What problems? Is there actually a link?

You can say something meaningful, but so far, you are just spewing vague and general ideas in the hope that your reader will feel bad. Present FACTS! Use meaningful words and phrases. The current trend in U.S. Elementary Education is to get students to use inflammatory language in the hope of awakening people to action. I think this is horrible. I think we should tell people the truth and back it up with evidence. Trust people to understand when you explain clearly.

My views. I welcome others'.

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^Yes; support your reasoning with examples.

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so basically these two pics which I want to share with u

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The first tell the essay structure and in second there are just the topics

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@is3535

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@SkaterBoyShawn

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plz look at two pics

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it may help u

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k did

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do you look at eassy structure

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yes

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ok lets go on the essay

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are you there

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yes

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ok so let gt start

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do you read my essay

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still reading

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ok take ur time

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u need help with conclusion taking 2 long sorry done

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so is it fine

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nope first i need to finish my body paragraphs

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yeah why would i lie 2 you just need 2 spell some words right and re place them i can do that 4 u

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ok sure

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i can just fix it or what ?

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but i don't finish the body paragraphs yet

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yeah fix there

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do i have to enter my name don't mind is that apart of it

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just write ur name

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real name

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lol just write any name

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can i do my real one