standing a tall sturdy man
looking up to the sky
Asking the almighty question
why now
why her
with no response
he stands up straight
and does what no one thought of
...
he walked into the light of day
and changed his life around
for her
for him
and for God

written by phillip j marco

Question

standing a tall sturdy man
looking up to the sky
Asking the almighty question 
why now
why her
with no response
he stands up straight
and does what no one thought of
...
he walked into the light of day 
and changed his life around
for her
for him
and for God

written by phillip j marco

anonymous · Answer

@sammixboo

anonymous · Answer

@destinyyyy

anonymous · Answer

it has a great message. little light and airy for my personal taste but the actual writing is very good. i would have liked to have seen more depth and less simple. But it is still a very well written poem. I think my problem was that i didnt make a personal connection to the poem.

anonymous · Answer

i take your thoughts to consideration @ispike and i like to know others thoughts so thank you this was a personal thing and how i felt so its how it came out