Question

A song I wrote, I hope you like it.
It randomly came to my head, so let me know what you guys think about it :D
Thanks ;D

Answer 1

When I’m flyin’ with the stars above,
You fly in the sky beside me
The wind in my hair, and the shine of yours
Your great,
But I am even better,
Video games ain’t my thing
I’d rather play with feathers,
But as long as your good to me
I will always treat you better
You make me crazy
Just so crazy
I don’t know what to do
every time I am around you,
you make me soar
you make me high
you make blueberry chills taste hot
but when I’m with you
everything becomes best,
you are my galactic king with a spicy sting,
And You make me crazy,
You make me smile,
You make me feeling loved as if I was a child,
You make me feel as if everything is worth living for,
But the mystery to look forward to
Is wondering if you
Will always believe in me like I believe in you,
You make my home not feel good like I feel for you,
Because like I’ve said so,
I am so crazy in love with you,

You make it hard not to smile,
Because you’re so crazy I cant help my feelings,
My emotions are lifting me high,
Making my feelings hit the ceilings,
Roses aren’t red unless I’m with you,
Their thorns aren’t sharp unless I have you,
And I want you to know that you make me crazy,
Just so crazy for you.

You’re the one that make them puppets combust,
The pipes that rust of red,
And skies with the bluest blue,
Every time I see you, the colors get brighter,
And to see your smile is worth every time worth wild,
Because I know I can be me when I am with you,
Nobody can stop my heart like you do,
There is nothing in this world where I’d like to be,
Unless of course I have you by my side,
So my ride can be like me surfin’ the tide,
On my board, or at the shore,
I will wait,
If you meet me have way at the borderline is where I want to see,
Are we truly meant be,
I mean I love,
There is nothing in this world that can explain it,
Even somebody famous couldn’t explain it,
But all I know is that when I’m with you,
The world just stops,
And ends with you and me,
Happy(yeah oh yah happy) is what I feel when I’m with you,
You make the stars look prettier when I am with you,
Your style,
You’re Smile,
Your eyes,
Your personality,
There is nothing in this world I’d rather see,
Because I love you,
And that is where I’d rather be,
With you is my home,
With you is my dream,
With you I feel I can be my strongest,
And be free,
Because you make me crazy,
Crazy in love,
I’d even let you put a ring on it,
And the box on the left is for you and me,
Because I hope you are to,
Crazy in love with me

Answer 2

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Answer 3

@ichliebedich @urbanmorgans @undeadknight26 @a7x_forever @radar @RAINAR @logan420 @ilovechu @domebotnos @DoShKa_SyRiA @YGHOOTIE @Jamierox4ev3r @perl @samjordan @codyisbeast @Compassionate @sidney_girl1419 @sleepyjess @_axel.yahir_ @mbailey436 @creegan @yahman

Answer 4

it's really nice :)

Answer 5

awesome

Answer 6

awesome keep it up

Answer 7

Kinda surprised to see an original work here that's this long. Good job.

Answer 8

Very good. Hands down.

Answer 9

Noice! I love it! *Australian Accent

Answer 10

@HackberryAbby18 u came up with this i like the song keep it up and thanks 4 the advice

Answer 11

Haha yah I did, and thanks guys :D It came randomly

Answer 12

Oh and LOVE THE ACCENT!! @Tlynn514

Answer 13

@razor99

Answer 14

Wooww u are a good songwriter keep up the good work

Answer 15

Thanks :D

Answer 16

@TylerMJ325

Answer 17

@jackmullen10

Answer 18

It's indeed a bit long But I like it a lot

Answer 19

lol thnks

Answer 20

@Paintking95

Answer 21

@Legends

Answer 22

I love it! Good Job.

Answer 23

Thanks. especially cuz a legend said they liked it lol

Answer 24

Lol no problem Cx

Answer 25

XD lol

Answer 26

shocking all that came randomly to ur head xD all at once

Answer 27

nice! :)

Answer 28

not calling u dumb or anything just mean thats allot

Answer 29

Ik, and IKR! It was suprising to me too so its all good @just_one_last_goodbye

Answer 30

And thanks @danicap

Answer 31

check out some of my lyrics

Answer 32

Tag me :D

Answer 33

the song it amazing i love it you did a really good song

Answer 34

lol TY XD

Answer 35

i like it

Answer 36

Thanks @SkaterBoyShawn Your good at making songs yourself :D

Answer 37

me and a bro are gonna make a new one

Answer 38

I better get to hear it lol :D

Answer 39

k i'll tag u ok

Answer 40

Yay!! Okay :D

Answer 41

some one wants to see my skate video in spain

Answer 42

k done 1 sec plz

Answer 43

ok

Answer 44

almost done @HackberryAbby18

Answer 45

lol ok

Answer 46

i wanna see the skate vid

Answer 47

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=36Grftd9qis

Answer 48

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0oeI2udWXOY

Answer 49

why is your name splt different? and on a different video you said was you rapping you don't look like this.. ?

Answer 50

and you said you're 17 but on the video they're like 17 and that was 2010.

Answer 51

no u are wrong

Answer 52

lol ok.

Answer 53

i tag u @HackberryAbby18

Answer 54

@HackberryAbby18 we waiting on u or anyone else

Answer 55

What do u need me for?

Answer 56

u said u wanted to hear it

Answer 57

Long but It is nice!

Answer 58

Thanks @mathman101

Answer 59

hey don't thank me it is a fact

Answer 60

not a opinion

Answer 61

Awe thanks

Answer 62

Scientists like me deal with facts not opinions we found a scientific discovery a really good song writer

Answer 63

You!

Answer 64

lol thanks

Answer 65

So congratulations you have a great talent!

Answer 66

lol um thanks?

Answer 67

its good u should keep making songs you will be on american idols

Answer 68

It is true! If you don't believe me read the great comments they put you on the board.

Answer 69

lol I cant sing though xp

Answer 70

im do u rap or something cause the words are inspiring keep it up

Answer 71

Yes a dog singing is better than you ... not! I can't sing at all I bet you just don't accept it.

Answer 72

me

Answer 73

lol no I no for a fact I cant sing lol

Answer 74

You can keep saying that but I believe you are a great singer even though you may think you can't sing.

Answer 75

tri it @HackberryAbby18

Answer 76

I have, and I fail even ask ma friends lol

Answer 77

oh well whats the words at the top if u can't sing

Answer 78

Just try It!

Answer 79

Another misuse of the word "random" I see!

Answer 80

i think @HackberryAbby18 can sing

Answer 81

Lol im singing ur song in real life :D great job...I LOVE IT!11

Answer 82

lol Thanks @RachelRobloxNerd

Answer 83

No problem!

Answer 84

@HackberryAbby18 we are not going to laugh at you if you sing bad Open Study is to encourage,help, and cheer up people not the opposite.

Answer 85

lol you guys are all sweet, but I honestly cannot sing lol You can ask any of my friends lol

Answer 86

i can't ethier

Answer 87

See I'm not the only one haha

Answer 88

@HackberryAbby18 Do you like michale jackson?

Answer 89

i suck at singing i showed
@danicap

Answer 90

I bet again you are better than me who wants to see a dog sing I'll laugh at myself!

Answer 91

Yah I love the king of pop :D Well one of em