which would work as the introductory sentence of essay on a memory elephant? -an elephant tusk can grow 7 inches in a year and grow constantly throughout its life -airsoft the ones called the elephant the Beast which passeth all others in wit and mind -elephant tusk are made of calcium phosphate in our stuff compared with things like rock -elephants are called herbivores either they use their trunks to pick up leaves off trees
i would combine the 4 and use them all , but you need an interesting topic sentence
Don't just give out answers.
i prefer none....begin it simple ....Like...An elephant, one of the largest animal on land, known for its wit and obedience...for a bit higher level maybe like this.....Elephants (Loxodonta africana) is one of the largest specie on land....
@TheRaggedyDoctor i didn't give him an answer i gave him advise. he already had the 4 sentences and i just said to make a better one and if that is what you call giving answers . well i don't know how you would learn anything. and frankly i think your wrong. i have been teaching and learning a long time now.
I agree with you HWBUSTEROO....whats the problem in giving out answers....it can help in improving his answer more naaa...
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