Question

I need help editing this..... the document is attached below but this is what needs to be fixed whoever helps will be fanned and metaled (:
this is my teachers response.
Autumn,

Greens 1 and 3 do not have transitions.

Green 3 is not a reason. It is part of the evidence.

Book titles are underlined or italicized.

Blues 2 & 3 need to be actual evidence from the readings.





forever."(pg.54) - forever," (p. 54).