Question

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

I'll do something quiet such as reading, gardening, or bird-watching instead of riding roller coasters with you.



A.
I'll do something quiet: such as reading, gardening, or bird-watching instead of riding roller coasters with you.


B.
I'll do something quiet: such as reading, gardening, or bird-watching—instead of riding roller coasters with you.


C.
I'll do something quiet—such as, reading, gardening, or bird-watching—instead of riding roller coasters with you.

Answer 1

a i think

Answer 2

yea im pretty sure its a

Answer 3

im thinking A too but let me make shure

Answer 4

YEA A is the only posible answr because the rest looks wrong

Answer 5

okay thanks here comes the next one

Answer 6

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

Birds outside at the feeder such as cardinals, finches, and chickadees keep the cat entertained at the window for hours.



A.
Birds outside at the feeder: such as cardinals; finches; and chickadees, keep the cat entertained at the window for hours.


B.
Birds outside at the feeder—such as cardinals, finches, and chickadees—keep the cat entertained at the window for hours.


C.


Birds outside at the feeder, such as cardinals, finches, and chickadees—keep the cat entertained at the window for hours.

Answer 7

A or C

Answer 8

I believe c

Answer 9

YEA im going for C also

Answer 10

okay

Answer 11

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

The youngest campers ages 3–5 will listen to a story between lunchtime and naptime.



A.
The youngest campers ages 3–5 will listen to a story between lunchtime (and naptime.)


B.
The youngest campers (ages 3–5) will listen to a story between lunchtime and naptime.


C.
The youngest campers ages 3–5 will listen to a story between lunchtime (and naptime).

Answer 12

i think b

Answer 13

B

Answer 14

lol can you post in new thread
its easier
so i dont have to scroll down

Answer 15

But yeah it might be B

Answer 16

okay im opening a new thread now

Answer 17

the first one is c
the second one is b
and the third one was right