Question

I have been writing a book and I know many of you hate me but, at least read it... Punk Life. Check out my new poem my Best Friend's pet died. http://allpoetry.com/poem/12118389-Good-Bye--For-the-loss-of-Scar--by-poeticdarkangel

Answer 1

Punk Life
“OW,” Rebecca said as I punched her in the arm. “You know I bruise easily! I don’t even know why I hang out with you, Meanie.” I fell down laughing, “You mean Melanie.” I said grinning. “I am the goriest punk that ever existed.” Liz looked up from her phone, “The girliest punk you mean, the next thing you know you will be dressed up in hot pink. If you continue to hang out with us,” she paused to stare at her phone. After forever she finally said, “The Barbie’s. Ooh cool I met a guy he sounds hot.” I peeked over to see, “you don’t even see his face.” Rebecca shot a warning glare and smiled sweetly at Liz, “Maybe he’s the one.” I snickered “she already told him she loved him.” Rebecca pointed at the door. I shrugged and walked out. They still think I am going to stay “stupid Barbie’s”, I muttered as I pulled out cigarette. Someone stood in front of me staring I took notes of what the person looked like. Male, blue eye, black hair, slightly muscular, and of course a stern face. He glanced at my cigarette, “those things kill.”
“These things are cigarettes,” I muttered as I threw my cigarette at Rebecca’s house.
The boy laughed, “Damn what did they do to you? Kick you out of the Goth meeting?”
“They’re Barbie’s,” I spat out as I left.

Answer 2

When I said blue I forgot to add the fact the other eye was dark brown...

Answer 3

*blue eye
LOL

Answer 4

@TheRaggedyDoctor

Answer 5

I like it

Answer 6

Thank you, If I publish I will give you a code to get for free...

Answer 7

*get it

Answer 8

i like it so far.. keep up the good work!!

Answer 9

Thank you free copies to positive and un-positive comments!

Answer 10

looks great! keep up the good work :)

Answer 11

Thank you.

Answer 12

Eh.

Answer 13

And the problem with the book is? Doc Mcstuffins it seems like everyone else likes it. But why do not like it? Let me know what you dislike. So I can correct it. Thank you for the honesty.

Answer 14

Or was that for the poem I wrote or both the book and poem?
And quick question do you have a brother named Alex?

Answer 15

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UNgtFx-ohifCT6WQe379NsECeLtaS4p3Y8Nwnvr2lTc/edit Here is a link to the rest of it so far. Hopefully it changes meh into Awesome. See that capital A.

Answer 16

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UNgtFx-ohifCT6WQe379NsECeLtaS4p3Y8Nwnvr2lTc/edit Remember to be logged on to google, the other link may not work so.... This one might no either but at least try. Let me know if it works or doesn't.

Answer 17

Nvm

Answer 18

I love it

Answer 19

Do you have a Wattpad?

Answer 20

Yes.......

Answer 21

What's your username?!

Answer 22

nice one:)))