Question

Could someone revise my outline and thesis? Thank you.

Answer 1

What's the topic you want to write about?-
high school graduates should take a year off before entering college

What's your main opinion on this topic?
I believe high school graduates should take a year off before entering college, a graduate can travel, relax after doing 12 years of school, volunteer/intern, or work to save up money for tuition

What's the strongest argument supporting your opinion?
instead of going right into school graduates should do more research on colleges and learn more about a particular field of study they would like to major in

What's a second good argument that supports your opinion?
explore other interests they might have

What's the main argument against your opinion?
parents feeling anxious and uncertain of their child not going straight into college and that some graduates might not ever go to college after taking a year off

What's a possible title for your Essay?
- I dont have one yet