Question

Can someone please help me? I will metal and fan

Answer 1

I need help with my thesis statement.. I have to use this website--
http://www.tommarch.com/electraguide/thesis.php

Answer 2

The questions it asks on the website---
What's the topic you want to write about?-
high school graduates should take a year off before entering college

What's your main opinion on this topic?
I believe high school graduates should take a year off before entering college, a graduate can travel, relax after doing 12 years of school, volunteer/intern, or work to save up money for tuition

What's the strongest argument supporting your opinion?
instead of going right into school graduates should do more research on colleges and learn more about a particular field of study they would like to major in

What's a second good argument that supports your opinion?
explore other interests they might have

What's the main argument against your opinion?
parents feeling anxious and uncertain of their child not going straight into college and that some graduates might not ever go to college after taking a year off

What's a possible title for your Essay?
- I dont have one yet

Id like to use the information above.. But it comes out weird and I need help fixing the answers to make the thesis work so that the outline it creates on the website will work as well.

Answer 3

@Babynini

Answer 4

Hey, sweetheart! I'm actually studying for finals this week so I can't help at the moment :/ when is this due?

Answer 5

By the 21st. But I have midterms this weekend so im trying to get it done by Friday

Answer 6

hrm my last final is Friday. so I can't help till Friday afternoon. Sorry!!

Answer 7

Oh okay. Its alright.

Answer 8

If you haven't finished by then I can help for sure. Good luck :)

Answer 9

Alright.. Thanks ill need it