Question

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I'm not so good at English so please don't judge me.

Answer 1

Fix the following sentences:
1) I surprise my freind because I buyed for my freind blu: dress
2) Abraham lincoln, who was the 16th president of the us, who was born in kentucky.
3) I was sad because my mom didnot pick me up for school; today so I had to walk home in the pouring rain
4) I spied on my sister she plans murder my neighbor so i call cops.
5) He said I did good jub in my test 5 year ago i remember.
6) I run more faster than a eagle flies!!!
7) Can you beleive my mom is president Obama's sister so he is my uncle, see!
8) do you now the answer, i asked, she said no, so I got real mad as a taecher
9) my dad is a docter?
10) she is more good than i am at soccor but its my best sport.

HELP ME ASAP PLEASE!!!

Answer 2

@XxMuslimxX

Answer 3

someone! Anyone! pleaze

Answer 4

Sure thing. I can help.

Answer 5

THX SO MYCH

Answer 6

1) I surprised my friend when I bought her a blue dress!

Answer 7

Can you explain how you got that?

Answer 8

Um...sure?

Answer 9

1. Surprise is present tense, you are speaking about the past because later on in the sentence you said 'buyed'

The sentence is now:
I surprised my freind because I buyed for my freind blu: dress

2. This sentence contains a plural spelling error: 'buyed' is expected to be the past sense of buy but the correct past sense of buy is bought.

The sentence is now:
I surprised my freind because I bought for my freind blu: dress

3. Friend is also misspelled. You should switch around the 'ei' so it is 'ie' in the word 'friends.

The sentence is now:
I surprised my friend because I bought for my friend blu: dress

4. You are talking about the color blue, so note that it is spelled with an 'e' at the end.

The sentence is now:
I surprised my friend because I bought for my friend blue: dress

5. Now, you do not need a colon between blue and dress because a colon is used to indicate that a writer is introducing a quotation or a list of items, etc.

The sentence is now:
I surprised my friend because I bought for my friend blue dress

6. You are talking about ONE (single) dress so you should say 'a (blue) dress'

The sentence is now:
I surprised my friend because I bought for my friend a blue dress

7. Now we need to know whether this friend is a he or a she because we can't call this friend, 'my friend' throughout the sentence.

The sentence is now:
I surprised my friend because I bought for her a blue dress

8. Since because replaces since, we will replace because with WHEN (I told you why in the PM)

The sentence is now:
I surprised my friend when I bought for her a blue dress

9. We no longer need the word 'for' in there since 'her' says it all.

The sentence is now:
I surprised my friend when I bought her a blue dress

10. Now, we need to add punctuation at the end. In this case we will use a exclamation point, '!'.

The sentence is now:
I surprised my friend when I bought her a blue dress!

Answer 10

Thank you!!!