Question

im writing a new song now.... Its called "dont need you anymore" feedback plz..

Answer 1

I have so many feelings
I’m feeling so confused
heart broken, unstoppable crying
i thought i really knew you
you told me that you loved me
i know now that it’s a lie
i’m going on without you
it’s time to say goodbye

no more pain, and no more lies
you broke my heart too many times
now i can see what i couldn’t before
i’m better off now, don’t need you anymore.

you left me there alone
crying in the rain
bleeding deep inside
do you feel the pain?
no, of course you don’t
you’ll never understand
to be hurt by the girl you loved
what it’s like to be the man

no more pain, and no more lies
you broke my heart too many times
now i can see what i couldn’t before
i’m better off now, don’t need you anymore

i should of known better than to give away my heart

Answer 2

i am not done yet tho...

Answer 3

@puppylove<3123 @puppylover0617 @puppylover52

Answer 4

Wow, Teresa! It's amazing. I'm speechless. :O

Answer 5

boring and stupid.

Answer 6

i think its good don't pay atention to Jonrooks he is just being mean

Answer 7

thanks guys

Answer 8

wow that's just like always

Answer 9

well id need a tune to read it to

Answer 10

lol ya!

Answer 11

i like that im working on an album called rules of atractions

Answer 12

This is really amazing. (:

Answer 13

thx guys

Answer 14

This is better than most of my songs!

Answer 15

thank you

Answer 16

i love it

Answer 17

Wow I love it!!! You are really good!!! Keep up the good work!!!! :)

Answer 18

thank you! its my 13th song

Answer 19

That would be an amazing lyrical song to dance to.

Answer 20

You might want to indicate, at the very least the chord progression, the rythm or a sheet version so people can hear what you imagined the song to be, else, this would be but lyrics and work better as a poem rather than a song, thus, not belonging in this section.

Answer 21

To be honest this is just like me i think of all these same things everyday. This is amazing. I love it. Thanks. <3

Answer 22

This song is awesome, It has a lot of raw emotion which is great!

Answer 23

I agree with a lotta you it was a very well put song :D

Answer 24

thank you! music is just everything to me so i write. i have the beat and everything to the song, i just haven't recorded it yet. thats what im going to work on.

Answer 25

r u just a song writer or composer too?@teresar7

Answer 26

what if...it was screamed 0-0

Answer 27

its not screamo lol yes i write songs and i sing them.