Peter, Peter, pumpkin eater,
Had a wife and couldn't keep her.
He put her in a pumpkin shell,
And there he kept her very well.

I must come up with an adult version of a childish poem, any help or suggestions?

Question

Peter, Peter, pumpkin eater,
Had a wife and couldn't keep her.
He put her in a pumpkin shell,
And there he kept her very well.

I must come up with an adult version of a childish poem, any help or suggestions?

misssunshinexxoxo · Answer

What do you mean by "adult" version? Better describing words?

anonymous · Answer

Peter, Peter what a cheater. 
Had a wife but couldn't keep her. 
He locked her away in a cell. 
And there he will keep her very well. 
Was that helpful?

crissy15 · Answer

great thanks! and yea adult words ,better describing.