Question

Can someone please help me with a thesis and creating an outline? I will metal and fan! Thank you

Answer 1

Very great; no mistakes and good punctuation. :)

Answer 2

Which one??

Answer 3

wait what do u need help on?

Answer 4

Creating a thesis and outline

Answer 5

I believe that you should use the second one although better punctuation is needed

Answer 6

Okay.. What about an outline?

Answer 7

ok do u need the setup?

Answer 8

That is a very long sentence. Divide it into smaller sentences.

Answer 9

I thought a thesis statement is suppose to be one sentence?

Answer 10

Yes but not that long. Make it concise

Answer 11

Which one though?

Answer 12

Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the people camping can see unique and beautiful sights, I like camping in the woods, but I love vacationing at a resort because and resorts have a.c./heat, comfy beds, showers, in door toilet with door and lock, sometimes spa's, room service or restaurants, maids and security, people, pools or hot tubs, soda/ice machines, elevators, no bugs.

Answer 13

Alright.. Um should I remove words?

Answer 14

Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the people camping can see unique and beautiful sights --> Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the campers can see unique and beautiful sights,

Answer 15

Yup, good idea. BTW ^^ good!

Answer 16

Did I help?

Answer 17

So far yes.. I still need an outline

Answer 18

So, like an argumentative essay or what kind of essay outline?

Answer 19

Im contrasting "Camping in the deep woods/wild to vacationing at a resort." I like camping in the woods but vacationing at a resort is more me

Answer 20

@Kash_TheSmartGuy ??

Answer 21

Sorry

Answer 22

Its okay.