Question

This is not a question it is a poem
Let the world burst out
Let it be covered in flames
Let the fire burn away all the bad
and all the pain
When its all burned down
and every things over
When the past begins to
blow away with all the ash
Feel the light come back again
Feel nature bloom all over the place
Feel as life rebuilds
coming back out of the flames
This is the phoenix
When its all burned down
and everything's over
When the past begins to
blow away with all the ash

Answer 1

Let the world burst with love
Let it be covered in happiness
Let nature brush away all the bad
and all the pain
This is the phoenix

Answer 2

cool!

Answer 3

any questions?

Answer 4

No it is not a question just something I came up with

Answer 5

@dan815 how is this

Answer 6

its really good love it

Answer 7

Thanks

Answer 8

I love it!

Answer 9

Thank you

Answer 10

@Poppies come check out my awesome poem

Answer 11

okay let me read it first kay?

Answer 12

ok

Answer 13

I love it, It's original and it makes sense XD. Great work
@Keigh2015

Answer 14

Is this like for reals!?

Answer 15

Thank you @sasher

Answer 16

You made this!?

Answer 17

Yes I made this

Answer 18

The past blows away too at the end?

Answer 19

The past yes blows away but in the end a new world is created hence why I chose the phoenix because they are reborn from their own ashes, so I am saying the world is reborn out of the ashes

Answer 20

Yes I like that very much, you should write more

Answer 21

I will try it took me a while to get this one

Answer 22

@paki @Owlcoffee come check this poem out that I created idk if you will like it

Answer 23

@little_rebel

Answer 24

OMG I LOVE IT! This is the best ever!
:) Keep writing poems.

Answer 25

Thanks

Answer 26

@Haseeb96 hey come read my poem i made

Answer 27

Good job my smart boy :)

Answer 28

Thank you @Haseeb96

Answer 29

@firefighter1400 why don't you come look at this after your final it will take you a while to read look at this after your test

Answer 30

Its a great poem the word flow very well.

Answer 31

thanks

Answer 32

@misssunshinexxoxo come check out my poem once your done helping

Answer 33

Amazing poem; very sweet! :D

Answer 34

Thank you

Answer 35

I revised it a bit

Let the world burst out

Give it a chance to be secured on fire

Let the flame consume with extreme heat all the terrible

also, all the torment

When its all burned to the ground

also, every things over

At the point when the past starts to

clear out with all the fiery remains

Feel the light return once more

Feel nature blossom everywhere

Feel as life revamps

returning out of the flares

This is the phoenix

When its all burned to the ground

what's more, everything's over

At the point when the past starts to

clear out with all the fiery debris

Let the world burst with adoration

Give it a chance to be secured in bliss

Let nature brush away all the awful

furthermore, all the torment

This is the phoenix

Answer 36

Thank you

Answer 37

@undeadknight26 come check out my poem idk if you will like it

Answer 38

@tinkerbell2001 come take a look at my poem

Answer 39

neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat

Answer 40

thank you

Answer 41

IS EVERYTHING OKAY????????????????????????????????????????

Answer 42

yes why?

Answer 43

OH OKAY THE POEM IS VERY DEEP , I LIKE IT :)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 44

Thank you, if you want to you can check out two pictures I created and posted on the subject design I will just tag you so you can go to them

Answer 45

Loved your poem <3 keep on making poems .