Question

help

Answer 1

how to make what i'm writing longer?

Answer 2

@misssunshinexxoxo

Answer 3

you can help?

Answer 4

Ill help :)

Answer 5

i could help

Answer 6

you can both help :)

Answer 7

i just don't know how to make what i'm writing longer.

Answer 8

What do you want to make longer :) We could both help you give me a medal ill give you one

Answer 9

i have to make a paragraph on my goals.

Answer 10

Well what do you want to make longer

Answer 11

1 page long double spaced.

Answer 12

typing.

Answer 13

Okay so a paragraph is 5 sentances

Answer 14

Try to separate your words
let me see what you have

Answer 15

yah. i have like 8 sentences, but it's barely have a page.

Answer 16

Let me see what you have

Answer 17

ok

Answer 18

Copy and paste what you have so far so we can check it out

Answer 19

can i do google docs?

Answer 20

Just copy and paste it here

Answer 21

32363@students.ausd.net add me on google doc.

Answer 22

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BmSWlQuAJGqj68rcnROyTrH2zD-ZMcFgsxgaWIbPmZ8/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 23

how could i make this longer??

Answer 24

Yo, let me edit it

Answer 25

you have the ability now.

Answer 26

okay

Answer 27

are you the chipmunk dolphin or the squirrel?

Answer 28

I am the one without a name currently I forgot to sign into my google account

Answer 29

Excellent!

Answer 30

Im glad you like it now :)

Answer 31

but what did you do that I didn't do?

Answer 32

I actually write my own books so I am pretty good with words

Answer 33

I enhanced it :D

Answer 34

read it now

Answer 35

Now I will let Joanne do some work

Answer 36

how come i don't know what else to write??

Answer 37

it's like nothing comes to my head.

Answer 38

Write about the reasons you are in the class in separate paragraphs, but turn those sentences into one and make a thesis statement out of them

Answer 39

You see the highlighted?

Answer 40

yes.

Answer 41

Make a thesis statement out of it and make a paragraph for each of those reasons

Answer 42

wait i only have to write one paragraph.

Answer 43

Oh really?

Answer 44

yeah, she didn't say how long to make the paragraph though lol.

Answer 45

it's done right?

Answer 46

I believe so :)

Answer 47

i mean for the other stuff i have to do it's one paragraph double spaced 1 page long, but that's a reflection paragraph on a short story.

Answer 48

Sometimes its better to have a powerful short paragraph vs a long weak one

Answer 49

I think this is perfect

Answer 50

hmm okay! thanks<3

Answer 51

can you teach me how to be like you now?

Answer 52

Lots of practice my friend but sure :D 

Answer 53

Hopefully you get a good grade :) GOOD LUCK

Answer 54

i did all of that joanne

Answer 55

Hello?

Answer 56

hi

Answer 57

oh sorry did i kick you from the docs thing? not sure what i did.

Answer 58

u kinda did

Answer 59

sorry!

Answer 60

is ok its good

Answer 61

join my new question!

Answer 62

add me