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Help!

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@misssunshinexxoxo

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Yes

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@Mindblast3r

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how do i know if i've written a good paragraph??

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what makes a paragraph good?

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Follow MLA formatting, good spacing, and use descriptive words.

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hmmm MLA formating??

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i know little of what that is.

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i feel like my paragraphs are never good enough. Can you read mines and tell me what you think?

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This is a good tool articlerewritertool.com and https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/

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Sure

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have you ever read the story hills like white elephants?

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Yes 9th grade

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I'm 16 combined 11 with 12th grade and a member of APA.

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APA?

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16 combined 11?

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I'm 16 years old and skipped 12th grade by combining both levels

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hmm really?

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American Psychological Association is what I'm a member of. They made APA formatting

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Show me your masterpieces :) of writing paste them here I call writing as an art

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FBXhrFuIx5hBbURyBtcLIBxzqMgPpbRpMvgTenOhHM0/edit

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google docs ok?

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What I think will happen in the story Hills like White Elephants is that the young lady will proceed with the fetus removal, on the grounds that, she is unsolved forceful, the American is manipulative and on the grounds that the young lady has low self-regard. The young lady is inactive forceful to the American man. "Would you please stop talking?"(478). After the man continued forcing her to get the fetus removal the young lady reacted in the politest way that could be available when she was disturb on the issue and did not need the premature birth; rather than privately letting him know that she doesn't need the fetus removal she beseeches him to stop in a furious estate. Furthermore the American man is manipulative to the young lady. "Be that as it may, I don't need you to" (478). The American man is telling the young lady how he doesn't need her to get the fetus removal after she boiled over on him. Last reason I accept she'll have a premature birth is on the grounds that, she has low self-regard. "I couldn't care less about me" (477). The young lady said this to the man after she was instructing him to get the premature birth; saying this demonstrates that she has low self-esteem. For the reasons of the young lady being detached forceful, having low self-regard and the American man being manipulative is the reason I accept the young lady will feel free to have the fetus removal.

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Indent and your good to go

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wait what?!

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did you edit this??

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Yes

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omg that's amazing!

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how did you do this so fast?

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Writing is an art that should be cherished

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Be confident in yourself, learn better vocab and keep writing

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that's all it is?

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what did you think of mine?

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Exceptional just needed bit of tweak in vocab

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Writing leads to journalism, and gateways. You write paragraphs perfectly

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exceptional?

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Yes :)

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"you write paragraphs perfectly" ?

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me specifically? or ?

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Yes

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why am i not confident in my writing?

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It's more of a vocab than structural thing. Because sometimes English teachers could be opinionated

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perfect!