Question

Essay

Answer 1

@FoxxJamey

Answer 2

i cant get those word docs to open on my laptop

Answer 3

Oh.. Okay ill try to post them

Answer 4

okay, so what now?

Answer 5

Yeah take out the Alaska part. I'd put something along the lines of "they both have exciting things to do and good times to be had." Something like that maybe

Answer 6

the pools, different resorts have activities that are unique to each one, meeting new people, friendly atmosphere

Answer 7

Are you trying to see if i think that's good?

Answer 8

Yes.. Sorry Im doing this and another assignment on the social science group

Answer 9

Yeah i think that links it better than what you had before, way better. and its all good :)

Answer 10

Okay.. Next part

Answer 11

yeah imo i'd take out the bug part

Answer 12

Yep thats good

Answer 13

I might need to add words later on

Answer 14

For some weird reason it changes it

Answer 15

Put a period after pesky bugs. A comma needs to go after "at a campsite", take out the comma between vampire bugs and mosquitos

Answer 16

and where that comma was put "and"

Answer 17

looks good, except up where it says "keep away bugs such as, " there doesnt need to be a comma

Answer 18

Okay

Answer 19

I have 528 words.. I need a min of 700. And a conclusion

Answer 20

well your conclusion should take care of most of the rest of the 700,, id write the conclusion first and then see how much you need to add

Answer 21

Okay.. And this "Finally, your ideas would flow better if you completed your sentence fragments. For example, you have some fragments from third body paragraph:

Or for the kids the arcade or play areas.
Or being trapped and scared in a camper or rv.

Sentence fragments like these are incomplete ideas that have no clear subject, predicate, or both. To clarify their ideas, you need to supply a subject, predicate, or a whole independent clause. "

Answer 22

Ugh professors i tell ya xD. You just need to find a way to make those complete sentences

Answer 23

Seriously lol .... Or for the kids the arcade or play areas to hang out at. ? Or being trapped and scared in a camper or rv during a storm. ?

Answer 24

That looks better

Answer 25

Okay... Now to start the conclusion ... :(

Answer 26

611 words

Answer 27

Don't worry you're doing great :). Conclusions are the easiest thing to write

Answer 28

Oh thanks :) Sureeeee they are

Answer 29

in my opinion they are :), you're welcome :)

Answer 30

Ughhh

Answer 31

whats wrong?

Answer 32

Writers block..

Answer 33

i hate writer's block. Have you taken a break recently?

Answer 34

Whats that? .... My only breaks are going to sleep at night or lunch.. I didnt take a lunch break today.

Answer 35

oh wow. Your brain might be on overload then, i'd take a short break and eat a snack or something

Answer 36

Alright.. Im gonna go eat something and head to the grocery store.. Ill be back on in an hour or so.. Then maybe Ill have ideas for the conclusion

Answer 37

okey dokey, ttyl