Question

In no fewer than three sentences critique the following paragraph. Explain where it could be improved then in your own words rewrite the paragraph to make it writing stronger make sure you include a hug supporting evidence and a topic sentence use correct spelling and grammar

Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories. Gardening offers more than a way for kids to have fun. There are many things to game from working with plants outside. It is unfortunate that people may feel too busy to garden.more people should take a chance with climbing to see what they can create.