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Anyone on here willing to help me??? Please. I need answers checked on questions. (Questions will be on fragment sentences, run-on, comma splice, active and passive voice, word choice (pronoun usage, their, his/her), correct sentence)

Answer 1

well. i can try

Answer 2

I have to get a B on the assignment. Its timed... I can give you examples of the questions

Answer 3

do you do online school

Answer 4

Yes my courses are online.

Answer 5

what is the question

Answer 6

what is the question and are you doing gavirtualschool

Answer 7

I haven't started it yet.. I was waiting for someone to say yes to helping me and that knows what I listed above good.

Answer 8

It will be multiple questions.. And no im not

Answer 9

how long do you have on the test

Answer 10

Im so stressed that im shaking. I HAVE to get a B. This is one of my last two assignments that will make or break my grade. I have an hour and 50 minutes. I dont know how many questions.

Answer 11

The two practice tests i took were 20 questions and 30 minutes

Answer 12

when does it have to be turned in

Answer 13

Its due tomorrow at 11:30 pm along with an essay.. But I have computer class that ends tomorrow as well with about 10 assignments still to do (power point) and 2 other classes that I will be completing in the next couple of weeks

Answer 14

I will help

Answer 15

Okay!! Thank you!!

Answer 16

Its an hour and 50 minutes

Answer 17

Going to start now.

Answer 18

What? An essay?

Answer 19

No.. A test?

Answer 20

Im looking for someone to check my answers before I submit it (I have not started it)

Answer 21

ok start telling ur questions

Answer 22

I actually can not start it right this moment. I just started cooking since no one had officially offered to help.. Would you be willing to help in about an hour or two? And are you super good at what I listed above?

Answer 23

ok ill help

Answer 24

Can you help me in about an hour? Please

Answer 25

yes

Answer 26

are u doing k12

Answer 27

No.. College

Answer 28

Okay thank you

Answer 29

o ok well ill tri my best

Answer 30

As long as I get a B

Answer 31

ok

Answer 32

The questions I believe will be like this-- (these are from my practice quiz)
7. Which of the following is the best sentence?
- Exhausted of its ore, the mine was closed. <---
- Exhausted of its ore the mine was closed.
- The mine was closed, exhausted of its ore.

8. Sara is my best friend, unfortunately, she forgot my birthday this year.
- Run-on
- Comma splice <--
- fragment
- correct

Answer 33

i think those are good

Answer 34

Alright.. Ill start it soon.. Finishing up cooking now

Answer 35

ok tag me when u start

Answer 36

i might b able to help too if u havent started yet @Destinyyyy

Answer 37

have u started yet @Destinyyyy

Answer 38

Im going to start in a few minutes.. Im logging in and getting everything ready @muscrat123 @slade

Answer 39

ok

Answer 40

My time limit is 1 hour and 50 minutes.. Starting now

Answer 41

50 questions.. Please still help me

Answer 42

1. Left-handers are sometimes referred to as "southpaws" on the average left-handers die about five years earlier then right-handers.
-run-on <---
-correct

2. Agility and strength had failed them, speed was the only way to evade their enemies.
- comma splice<--
- run-on

Answer 43

3. Every teenager should make sure that (he or she is, they are) consuming a sufficient amount of calcium.
he/she is <---

4. Which of the following sentence is INCORRECCT?
- I can't just sit here. I need to plan my next move.
-I can't just sit here; I need to plan my next move.
-I can't just sit here, I need to plan my next move. <--
-I can't just sit here! I need to plan my next move.

Answer 44

Are they correct? @muscrat123 @slade

Answer 45

i think so. im not sure on question 4

Answer 46

it is either the second one or the one u think

Answer 47

5. Which of the following sentences is correct?
- Because my financial aid check came early I was able to buy my books three weeks before the beginning of classes.
-Because my financial aid check came early; I was able to buy my books three weeks before the beginning of classes.
-Because my financial aid check came early. I was able to buy my books three weeks before the beginning of classes.
-Because my financial aid check came early, I was able to buy my books three weeks before the beginning of classes. <---

6. Sophia persuaded Nathaniel that he wasn't too shy to dance with she.
- correct
- incorrect <--

Answer 48

Okay come back to 4 then

Answer 49

7. The most exhilarating experience for my sister and me happened during our day of snorkeling.
correct
incorrec <--

8. Which of the following is correct?
Their getting closer to reaching some of there goals.
They're getting closer to reaching some of their goals. <--
Their getting closer to reaching some of their goals.
They're getting closer to reaching some of there goals.

Answer 50

9. Which of the following is correct?
- The skydivers pulled their parachute cords and watched as they silently drifted to the earth.
- The skydivers pulled their parachute cords, and watched as they silently drifted to the earth. <---
The skydivers' pulled their parachute cords and watched as they silently drifted to the earth.
The skydivers pulled their parachute cords; and watched as they silently drifted to the earth.

10. She was dancing through the room.
Active
passive <--

Answer 51

5 + 6 :correct i think

7 + 8 : correct i think

9 + 10: correct i think


i say i think bc i am 95% sure and i want u to check b4 u take my word for it- im in 7th grade

Answer 52

11. The referendum was voted on by the citizens, who were being persuaded by environmental activist.
active
passive <--

12. If a mouse or a rat are showing signs of invading the home, call the exterminator.
correct <--
incorrect

Answer 53

Oh gosh.. Okay

Answer 54

@Teddyiswatshecallsme @misssunshinexxoxo Please help me!?!?!!?

Answer 55

last 2 are correct

Answer 56

13. Jacob is the only one of the staff members who have water safety traning.
- correct <---
incorrect

14. Which is correct?
-He couldnt believe Emily's reaction; she seemed deeply affected by the loss of his ring.
-He couldnt believe Emily's reaction she seemed deeply affected by the loss of his ring.
- He couldnt believe Emily's reaction, she seemed deeply affected by the loss of his ring. <---
- He couldnt believe Emily's reaction. Beacuse she seemed deeply affected by the loss of his ring.

Answer 57

@Kash_TheSmartGuy

Answer 58

do u still want my help? i have classes college level! i am very smart and can help

Answer 59

13 is correct, 14 is A.

Answer 60

15. Which is correct?
- The author, signed the books, discussed ideas with fans, and gave a talk about upcoming story lines.
-The author, signed the books; discussed ideas with fans; and gave a talk about upcoming story lines.
-The author signed the books, discussed ideas with fans, and gave a talk about upcoming story lines.
-The author signed the books, discussed ideas with fans, and gave a talk about upcoming story lines. <--

16. The teacher had decided to accept his unusual defense of the topic.
active
passive <--

Answer 61

Yes please still help me! And thank you @Kash_TheSmartGuy ill fix that

Answer 62

15. correct
16. no idea

Answer 63

Okay.. I know 16 is correct

Answer 64

17. Which is NOT true about outlining?
- A sentence outline is one type of outline that uses complete sentences to explain the main points.
- A topic outline is one type of outline that states each main point and essential details as a word or phrase.
- A formal sentence or topic outline has primary and secondary support.
- Drafting the essay first works as an outline.

^^ Im not sure

18. Which is NOT true about introductions?
- It should engage the reader.
- It should establish direction.
- It should state your thesis.
- it should be the longest paragraph in your essay <---

Answer 65

I think 17 is the third one

Answer 66

17. I think you're right
18. Correct

Answer 67

19. Which is NOT true about concluding paragraphs?
- It should introduce a new topic <--
- It should reassert the main point of the essay
- it should be interesting
-it should be complete and conclude your message

20. Which transition would NOT be used to add information?
- additionally
-another
-however
-next <--

Answer 68

19. Correct
20. Wrong. (However is correct)

Answer 69

Okay changed it...

21. Which is NOT true about sentences?
- You should use the same sentence lenght throughtout an essay<--
- you should vary your sentence opening
- you should vary your sentence length
- you should use parrallel structure when possible. <-- or this one :/

22. Which is NOT a strategy to generate ideas?
- freewriting
- listing-
clustering
- ignoring the assignment <---

Answer 70

21 is the first one

Answer 71

21. Correct (First one)
22. Correct (lolololol)

Answer 72

23. He is the most tall of the two candidates.
correct- yes or no <--

24. Neither the girl nor the boy are going to win their category.
correct- yes <-- or no

Answer 73

Lol thank you @Kash_TheSmartGuy

Answer 74

23. Correct
24. Correct

Answer 75

25. After Janie and I won the race, we did a victory lap around the field.
correct- yes <-- or no

26. Which would NOT be a good transition to show contrast?
- although
- however
- yet
- similarly <--

Answer 76

25. Correct
26. Correct

Way to go! @Destinyyyy

Answer 77

27. Which is correct?
- Reading the book was fun; writing the summary was difficult. <--
- Reading the book was fun, writing the summary was difficult.
- Reading the book was fun; to writing the summary was difficult.
- Reading the book was fun to writing the summary was difficult.

28. Every August 4, the pueblo celebrates the feast day of St. Dominic, he founded the Dominican order of Catholic.
- comma splice <--
-fragment
- correct sentence

Answer 78

27. Correct
28. I think you're right

Answer 79

29. I reached the plaza late in the morning; the crowd filled every street of the pueblo.
- comma splice
- fragment
- correct sentence <--

30. The music paused; the dancers stopped.
comma splice
fused sentece
correct sentence <--

Answer 80

29. Correct
30. Correct

How many more do you have?

Answer 81

31. During the interview the applicant must demonstrate self- confidence.
Active<-- passive

32. Attention must be given to the prospective employee's dress.
active passive <--

Answer 82

It goes to 50.. And could you check the ones before you started

Answer 83

33. A solid-colored dress with appropriate accessories is ofter worn by female supplicates.
- active passive <--

34. Questions should be answered by the applicant in a calm voice.
active passive <--

Answer 84

31. Correct
32. Correct
1. Correct
2. Correct
3. Wrong (They are is correct)
4. I think you're wrong (B is correct, I think)
5. Correct
6. Correct
7. Correct
8. Correct
9. Wrong (It's A)
10. Wrong (It's Active)
11. Correct
12. Correct

After this I was there

33. Correct
34. Wrong (It's Active)

Answer 85

35. The applicant should wait a few seconds before answering each quesion.
active<-- passive
Read the following sentences for parallel structure----

36.
-Reading, writing, and to perform were once elitist hobbies,
- The theater held workshops, open rehearsals, and they held auditioning.
- Private, corporate, and government sources all provide funding.

37.
-Canvas oxfords, commonly called tennis shoes, are usually cool, comfortable, and cushioned.
- We line gardening and to take a walk.
- During the holidays we like to spend time with family, to visit with friends and cooking good food.

38.
- Going to workshops and attending seminars are important to ones job.
- neither John is correct not is Mary giving the correct answer
- Adequate care and to provide balanced diets are very important in nursing homes.

Answer 86

39.
- Not only gardening but also the hobby of coin collecting can be personally rewarding.
- Both lettuce and tomatoes should be included in a chef's salad.
- Neither dieting nor exercising are considered enjoyable by most poeple

40.
-The Johnsjons are going to eat dinner together and visted their relatives.
- Yamaha and Steinway are well known piano makers.
- Try one of these delicious reciples, it is easy too.


Im not sure on the parallel struction questions :/

Answer 87

@Kash_TheSmartGuy

Answer 88

41. The fault is theirs if they failed to vote, if they voted against increased funding, or if they were ill-formed.
correct
incorrect

42. In addition, some parents are angry because, in comparing their education with their children's, they have decided that their children are learning less than them.
---them ---
corrcet
incorrect

43. We and them must cooperate to improve education. Us voters have to authorize the government to provide students with a quality education.
--- them, us---
correct
incorrect <---

Answer 89

Identify if fragment or not---

49. For example, blue chips stocks, penny stocks, income stocks, common stocks, and preferred stocks.
fragment
correct <--

50. Because of the development of fertility drugs, the number of multiple births in the United Stated is increasing each year.
fragment <--
correct

Answer 90

27 minutes left

Answer 91

u are done, correct?

Answer 92

I need the ones up top checked.. And I think 3 and 10 are right how I have them @Kash_TheSmartGuy

Answer 93

Starting at 35 checked @pooja195 @Teddyiswatshecallsme @TheSmartOne

Please!!!

Answer 94

36. last one
37. second one
38. first one
39. second one
40. first one
Correct??