the talmud is to the jewish religion what the bible is to christian religions.

I think this is how the sentence should end up like (The Talmud is to the Jewish religion what the Bible is to Christian religions. )

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the talmud is to the jewish religion what the bible is to christian religions. 

I think this is how the sentence should end up like (The Talmud is to the Jewish religion what the Bible is to Christian religions. )

anonymous · Answer

@KyanTheDoodle

kyanthedoodle · Answer

Seems pretty good. Maybe you should add an "as" before what, like this. The Talmud is to the Jewish religion as what the Bible is to Christian religions.

anonymous · Answer

okay, thanks Kyan. 
what about this one, 
for easter I went to visit my grandma in west texas.

this is how I think it should be--
For Easter I went to visit my grandma in West Texas.

kyanthedoodle · Answer

Yes indeed!