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OpenStudy (anonymous):

in 1956 the italian ocean liner andrea doria sank after a collision with the stockholm a swedish vessel how do I make that a sentence? In 1956 the Italian ocean liner Andrea Doria sank after a collision with the Stockholm a Swedish vessel.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@KyanTheDoodle

OpenStudy (kyanthedoodle):

It needs a bit more punctuation, like a few commas.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

In 1956, the Italian ocean liner Andrea Doria sank after a collision with the Stockholm, a Swedish vessel. is this better @KyanTheDoodle

OpenStudy (kyanthedoodle):

Almost. I think it should be like this: In 1956, the Italian ocean liner, Andrea Doria, sank after a collision with the Stockholm, a Swedish vessel.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

oh, okay. thanks Kyan!

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